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League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« on: August 26, 2011, 10:09:10 PM EDT »

With Bel Drayson dead, the Jedi find themselves without any senior Jedi Masters. They are also no closer to the truth as the tumult enveloping the galaxy deepens. No longer Padawans, and joined by their trooper and smuggler allies, they resolve themselves to protecting Corellia and returning the sovereign might to Republic.

Assuming the mantle
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« Reply #1 on: August 27, 2011, 04:44:59 AM EDT »

Very well written story. Worthy of a place in the Jedi Archives for all to read for generations to come...

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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« Reply #2 on: August 27, 2011, 05:33:14 AM EDT »

Epic beginning of something epic.
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« Reply #3 on: August 27, 2011, 08:04:08 AM EDT »

I have to say that the one thing that really struck me with the league's backstory is the fact that it's not one of those typical pieces of fanboism that one can easily find on the internet.

The story itself is well thought out and extremely believable within the context of the Star Wars Universe and even The Old Republic. 

I can tell you, for myself, this is an extremely appealing aspect of this guild.  Good job you guys!

* Round of applause. *
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« Reply #4 on: August 27, 2011, 02:28:27 PM EDT »

Yes, well, "realism", even in a fantasy setting, is something that we take very seriously.  Our back story needed to seem "believable" in order to make it easier for us to justify why we exist as an entity within the context of the game and its story.

Hopefully our assumptions about what happens on Corellia will turn out to be at least partially correct ;)
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« Reply #5 on: August 27, 2011, 05:25:27 PM EDT »

Hopefully our assumptions about what happens on Corellia will turn out to be at least partially correct ;)

Oh Otakuon!  I do have one question or thought.

Will Supreme Chancellor Janarus ever play a part with the story of the guild? (maybe not right now, but potentially once we learn more about him in the game).

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Janarus

http://www.swtor.com/info/holonet/biographies/supreme-chancellor-janarus

Apparently the Aurebesh on his entry at the SWTOR site indicates he is a 'Key to Corellia'.
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« Reply #6 on: August 27, 2011, 07:08:51 PM EDT »

After reading the story I can only say I'm proud of being a part of this awesome League
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« Reply #7 on: August 27, 2011, 10:10:17 PM EDT »

Oh Otakuon!  I do have one question or thought.

Will Supreme Chancellor Janarus ever play a part with the story of the guild? (maybe not right now, but potentially once we learn more about him in the game).

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Janarus

http://www.swtor.com/info/holonet/biographies/supreme-chancellor-janarus

Apparently the Aurebesh on his entry at the SWTOR site indicates he is a 'Key to Corellia'.

I have been wondering how big of role Janarus will play myself.  Key questions are: how does he view the Treaty of Coruscant and what are his opinions regarding the Jedi?  Guess we will have to wait and see...
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« Reply #8 on: August 28, 2011, 05:07:45 AM EDT »

Awesome chapter end! will there be a second Sirs
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« Reply #9 on: August 28, 2011, 05:20:05 PM EDT »

Well...after what amounted to 75 pages, I will be taking a short break.  My hope is that the future chapters will be told by league members.

But I hope to capture and translate some in game content...providing a written narrative for key story points in the game and linking them back to our league.
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« Reply #10 on: August 31, 2011, 05:01:57 PM EDT »

I loved it. It is an amazing story that is absolutely worth the read. Great backstory.

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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« Reply #11 on: January 04, 2012, 12:29:13 PM EST »

I love this, very well written and give me something to aspire to in my own story.
Can't wait to see my name in the League history!!
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« Reply #12 on: January 16, 2012, 03:44:13 PM EST »

Wow, this was amazing. I read it all within a couple hours span and it completely blew my mind. It makes me feels as though my choice to join this guild was the best thing I could have done. I also finally figured out why we were the Corellian League, haha.
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 14 - END (PART B)
« Reply #13 on: January 16, 2012, 05:24:09 PM EST »

Glad you liked it :)
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