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Author Topic: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 8  (Read 2752 times)

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League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 8
« on: July 14, 2011, 02:34:49 AM EDT »

Part three of "The Infiltration":



Quyn could see the smoke rising from the Coronet Municipal Complex through her thermal imaging.  They were close to the grounds, but the sudden realization that perhaps they were too late struck the young smuggler with alarming finality.

« Last Edit: October 23, 2011, 05:35:54 PM EDT by otakuon »
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 8
« Reply #1 on: July 14, 2011, 04:06:43 AM EDT »

As always, awesome work.

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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 8
« Reply #2 on: July 14, 2011, 05:57:58 AM EDT »

You need to sell this to biowear and lucas I mean it
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 8
« Reply #3 on: July 14, 2011, 07:51:43 AM EDT »

Again, very well written!  Good job!
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 8
« Reply #4 on: July 14, 2011, 08:18:48 AM EDT »

Did a slight edit "a ringing in his hears" replaced with "a ringing in his ears" :)

other then that, love it love it love it :)

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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 8
« Reply #5 on: July 14, 2011, 10:20:07 AM EDT »

Another wonderfully written part. I'm continually amazed by the flow that is there in something that is so packed with detail.
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 8
« Reply #6 on: July 14, 2011, 11:57:42 AM EDT »

Still top shelf stuff! Will all guild members be listed in this story if they are old enough according to ongoing events.  Awesome Job!
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 8
« Reply #7 on: July 14, 2011, 12:54:14 PM EDT »

Still top shelf stuff! Will all guild members be listed in this story if they are old enough according to ongoing events.  Awesome Job!

Unfortunately working another 491 characters into this story verges on being an impossible task.
This story is the official Corellian League RP back story. The story introduces the 9 founding members of the Corellian League that make up the current Corellian League Council by telling how and why they came together in defense of Corellia by forming a resistance group to the Sith infiltration of Corellia. 
Once the back story is complete, we encourage our members to write their own RP back stories exploring how they found themselves drawn into the Corellian League.
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 8
« Reply #8 on: July 14, 2011, 12:58:31 PM EDT »

Unfortunately working another 491 characters into this story verges on being an impossible task.
This story is the official Corellian League RP back story. The story introduces the 9 founding members of the Corellian League that make up the current Corellian League Council by telling how and why they came together in defense of Corellia by forming a resistance group to the Sith infiltration of Corellia. 
Once the back story is complete, we encourage our members to write their own RP back stories exploring how they found themselves drawn into the Corellian League.

That's what I thought! It was more of a Homer thinking out loud moment! :)
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 8
« Reply #9 on: July 14, 2011, 02:42:03 PM EDT »

Duuuuude.... EPIC
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 8
« Reply #10 on: July 14, 2011, 04:25:40 PM EDT »

Awesome yet again.
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 8
« Reply #11 on: July 15, 2011, 04:50:18 AM EDT »

This is going to be fun
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