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Author Topic: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.  (Read 26888 times)

Graeff

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #15 on: July 07, 2011, 01:49:30 AM EDT »

before we get to the adulthood I want to explain what happened to Jaden

Like when he became a jedi
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #16 on: July 07, 2011, 01:52:17 AM EDT »

awesome, you'll have to tell me more later, I have to get off soon
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #17 on: July 27, 2011, 03:31:27 AM EDT »

WOW, that ending came out of nowhere for me, thanks Jaden for those details that helped me tie that section altogether and finish it with a cliffhanger. By the way, here's an explanation for you readers: the Sith was able to shatter the transparisteel window using the Shatterpoint force power, quickly followed by a powerful telekinetic blast. Balan caught him unaware because he had to concentrate for a while to use his shatterpoint power, he was drained when he entered the room and was too focused on Jaden to defend himself from Balan.
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Graeff

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #18 on: July 27, 2011, 12:19:15 PM EDT »

How did you know he wasn't too bright?
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #19 on: July 27, 2011, 06:21:50 PM EDT »

from your description he seemed like he might be obsessive and thusly may get ahead of himself
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Graeff

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #20 on: July 27, 2011, 06:29:36 PM EDT »

Yeah he went insane. :-O very obbsesive
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Graeff

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #21 on: August 07, 2011, 01:24:57 PM EDT »

That man is horrible. I can't wait to kick him off a building or somthing. >:)
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #22 on: August 13, 2011, 03:41:22 AM EDT »

wow, that last post took a long time to mature in my mind, it came out a lot easier than I thought it would (thank goodness!), a lot of it might sound corny, or retarded. But, believe me, a lot of it is also based in fact. feedback please, even if it's 'what the heck??!!!!'
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #23 on: October 17, 2011, 04:57:07 PM EDT »

I don't think there's really any point to creating another comment thread for Vol. II So if anybody has any comments or feedback they'd like to give I'd love to hear them. Not sure what kind of a readership I have, but I hope they're entertained and enjoying themselves. :D
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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #24 on: October 20, 2011, 03:22:30 PM EDT »

a couple things.

1. whats the posting order

2. whos officially in this RP

3. whos turn to post next
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #25 on: October 20, 2011, 06:42:19 PM EDT »

1. Balan, Zoro?, Mong?, Sparrow

2. I had hoped Zoro would be able to join in right now, doesn't look like he'll be able to. We'll give him and Mong one more day to give me a pitch for their character to confirm their character being in the story. Mong said he'd get a little back story for William Brody to me soon, so hopefully we'll get him in. I sure hope Zoro can join to. Whoever joins or doesn't join we'll continue the story tomorrow or Saturday.

3. It's Zoro's turn, if he can't, then it'll be Mong's turn.
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Zoronius Novar of the Fictory Legacy

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #26 on: October 21, 2011, 01:34:08 PM EDT »

Would it be ok for me to meet you now? Like as part of the 5 men that are approaching you or not? cause i have an interesting idea but would just want to know your thoughts
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #27 on: October 21, 2011, 04:56:09 PM EDT »

I think that'd be good. What's your idea?
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« Reply #28 on: October 21, 2011, 10:09:02 PM EDT »

well sparrow and I are working together. (his smuggler is helping my character hunt down info on jedi and sith artifacts, possessions, objects, etc. being smuggled in and out of Nar Shadda)

So we're 2 out of the 5 men. The other 3 are a couple of pirates and 1 bounty hunter. The other 3 are the "snatch and grab" kind of guys. Turkish (sparrow) and Zoro 'infiltrated' their group to find out who the brains are and where all the objects go. We have no solid idea as to why they're approaching you. I'd say a small fight/skirmish breaks out and thus we meet. Of course, Zoro would not allow the other 3 to hurt you guys (your innocent as far as he is aware so far, but he may have questions) so he wont be a blatant threat.
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Balan

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« Reply #29 on: October 22, 2011, 02:55:55 PM EDT »

Sounds like a plan. The only thing I'm requiring, is that somehow Balan ends up with the durindfire gem in the lightsaber being transported (without stealing it from the Jedi Order, of course), and uses it in honor of the fallen jedi it came from.
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