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Author Topic: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.  (Read 27026 times)

Balan

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On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« on: June 30, 2011, 01:14:47 AM EDT »

Appreciate feedback and story suggestions from anyone! Please comment!

Looking forward to collaborating with Jaden on the next section of the story, after I finish the flashback section  :) .
« Last Edit: June 30, 2011, 01:16:31 AM EDT by Balan »
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Graeff

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #1 on: June 30, 2011, 01:23:05 AM EDT »

yeah can't wait 123 dang not long enough. so.....
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #2 on: June 30, 2011, 01:54:45 AM EDT »

lol, patience young one, those not in haste will be stronger for it
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Graeff

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #3 on: June 30, 2011, 02:11:10 AM EDT »

Yes Master Balan.
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #4 on: July 01, 2011, 04:33:22 AM EDT »

I keep feeling like my posts are too long lol
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Quyn Vigil

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #5 on: July 01, 2011, 08:50:47 AM EDT »

length when being discriptive and during opening posts is fine.  It's when others are joined in and there is actual conversation that you will run into only a couple lines worth of post so you don't presume to speak for another character.  That's when forum RP can become tedious. 

Looking good though :)
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Graeff

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #6 on: July 01, 2011, 11:20:42 AM EDT »

I keep feeling like my posts are too long lol

Well I feel like mine are too short.
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #7 on: July 01, 2011, 02:53:49 PM EDT »

length when being discriptive and during opening posts is fine.  It's when others are joined in and there is actual conversation that you will run into only a couple lines worth of post so you don't presume to speak for another character.  That's when forum RP can become tedious. 

Looking good though :)

Thanks Quyn :)
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #8 on: July 01, 2011, 02:54:53 PM EDT »

Well I feel like mine are too short.

Your posts are good, I can tell you're putting effort into them, it shows in your work. Thanks for doing this with me and enhancing the RP, was getting lonely doing it all by myself lol.
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Graeff

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #9 on: July 01, 2011, 03:06:51 PM EDT »

And hopefully we can get more people to rp with us. The more people the better. Well untill it gets out of hand. imagen 50 people posting on this. he he
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #10 on: July 02, 2011, 01:57:20 AM EDT »

haha, that'd be out of control
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Graeff

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #11 on: July 05, 2011, 01:58:22 AM EDT »

well we should wrap that childhood friendship up.
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #12 on: July 07, 2011, 12:49:49 AM EDT »

haha, this part is a little goofy
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Graeff

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #13 on: July 07, 2011, 01:24:52 AM EDT »

a little :)
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Balan

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Re: On the Streets, in the Shadows comment thread.
« Reply #14 on: July 07, 2011, 01:36:55 AM EDT »

I'm glad to finally start getting into Balan's maze of a mind, and the struggles involved in that.
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