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Author Topic: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 4  (Read 2504 times)

Tormaxx

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League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 4
« on: May 05, 2011, 03:46:27 PM EDT »

Part four...tragedy strikes our small band of Jedi while another young Jedi seeks to find his place amongst the chaos on Corellia:


Several months after their arrival on Corellia, Noval discovers evidence of possible Sith infiltration and control over local and Republic governance in Coronet City. He mounts a lone investigation, keeping it from Tormax and the others.  Within days the Jedi Consular has disappeared.  Not even Captain Tirnel is able to uncover information as to his whereabouts.  After many weeks Tormax resigns himself to the reality of his former Master
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 4
« Reply #1 on: May 06, 2011, 05:31:49 AM EDT »

very excellent work Jaxon
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 4
« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2011, 12:54:44 AM EDT »

Jaxon you keep getting better at this......especially liked the detailed description of the blaster's technology and firing mechanisms....kind of reminded me of Tom Clancy
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 4
« Reply #3 on: May 08, 2011, 01:05:33 AM EDT »

Thanks for the words of support! 
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 4
« Reply #4 on: May 08, 2011, 02:31:01 AM EDT »

This is amazing. I'd like to see how it turns out. Good job!
(Needs a bit more of me in it :P)
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 4
« Reply #5 on: June 15, 2011, 08:00:59 PM EDT »

Another excellent chapter!  One possible suggestion when posting these short stories.  Would it be possible to post a character list alongside it?  Basically indicating what the characters are, their race.. and who it is based off of.

Eg:

Tormax Drayson (Human-M) - Jedi Consular || otakuon ||
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 4
« Reply #6 on: June 16, 2011, 01:43:41 AM EDT »

I second JPRodian's motion. That would very helpful.
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 4
« Reply #7 on: June 16, 2011, 07:39:07 AM EDT »

I *think* far as I know, we're all human except Kell...who's part human, part shapeshifter.  The only indication that he's anything different is his deep olive skin though.
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 4
« Reply #8 on: June 16, 2011, 04:24:13 PM EDT »

I would at least like a list of the characters for each part, I get confused as to who is who because their mostly Coltons or Draysons. Maybe it's just me that gets that confused though, hah!
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 4
« Reply #9 on: June 16, 2011, 05:15:42 PM EDT »

Well, part of the problem is that some of us (like Me!) haven't posted our character back stories yet.  In my case, I have left mine purposely vague, especially my character's physical appearance, because I like to save that sort of stuff until I have an actual character created and in game.  But I will see if I can at least get JaxonRone to post a quick summary of the main characters (which are all the founding council members, BTW).
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 4
« Reply #10 on: June 16, 2011, 08:44:28 PM EDT »

Thanks, I was mainly just getting the different Coltons and Draysons confused :) .
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