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Author Topic: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 1  (Read 7420 times)

Dai'gur

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Re: League Back Story Teaser
« Reply #15 on: April 22, 2011, 02:08:34 AM EDT »

Ah crud 10-12 years after the treaty, my backgrounds been up for like 30 mins and its already wrong was afraid of just these type of issues. Blah maybe I could scrap it and start over...
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Re: League Back Story Teaser
« Reply #16 on: April 22, 2011, 02:33:26 AM EDT »

Very nice to know the proper timeline now it works better with my troopers past. Picture it Young mandalorian in the under city scraping by when it happens explosion rock the only sky/roof you have ever known and through the burning drusteel what he sees causing this death sith war ships raining fire on his world killing all that he has ever known

Ah I can't wait for this game love the snipit of the back story chairman sir I look forward to the rest of the briffing on it sir
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Re: League Back Story Teaser
« Reply #17 on: April 22, 2011, 03:35:45 AM EDT »

 8-| Back to drawing board on bio....
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Re: League Back Story Teaser
« Reply #18 on: April 22, 2011, 12:27:09 PM EDT »

I think that's what a lot of us said.
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Re: League Back Story Teaser
« Reply #19 on: April 22, 2011, 02:01:14 PM EDT »

see now this is why we suggested people wait on jumping on the RP character bio story writing for a little bit...because we didn't have the back story written yet.
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Re: League Back Story Teaser
« Reply #20 on: April 22, 2011, 04:16:02 PM EDT »

Eh, it was a minor change for me.  Had I bothered to double-check the timeline on the tor site I wouldn't have had the  mess up.
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Re: League Back Story Teaser
« Reply #21 on: April 22, 2011, 07:07:10 PM EDT »

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Re: League Back Story Teaser
« Reply #22 on: April 22, 2011, 07:55:14 PM EDT »

eh just minor editing for myself to. Mainly just times and dates.
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Re: League Back Story Teaser
« Reply #23 on: April 22, 2011, 11:25:52 PM EDT »

I'm just gonna scrap the bio I wrote I messed up on a bunch of stuff anyhow. Blah worst thing about me writing is I'm my own worst critic. Speaking of which I appreciate feedback on anything I write since at some point I intend to try to write novels.
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Re: League Back Story Teaser
« Reply #24 on: April 23, 2011, 08:18:26 PM EDT »

Good job, now I can add more to my character bio to relate
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 1
« Reply #25 on: June 05, 2011, 12:13:58 PM EDT »

Cool.
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 1
« Reply #26 on: July 07, 2011, 05:56:58 PM EDT »

Great read boss. Flows well.
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 1
« Reply #27 on: July 11, 2011, 09:46:34 AM EDT »

Good stuff - keep it coming!

Question: You say Tormax & Perth are with their "former masters" and they are "promising young Jedi Consulars" - do you mean that they're no longer padawans? (same with Jaxon) I thought JC were starting the game on Tython as padawans? Or are we treating this as special case b/c it's the league backstory?
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 1
« Reply #28 on: July 11, 2011, 10:31:43 AM EDT »

Awesome so far, great job!
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Re: League Back Story - Chapter One - Part 1
« Reply #29 on: July 11, 2011, 11:42:56 AM EDT »

Good stuff - keep it coming!

Question: You say Tormax & Perth are with their "former masters" and they are "promising young Jedi Consulars" - do you mean that they're no longer padawans? (same with Jaxon) I thought JC were starting the game on Tython as padawans? Or are we treating this as special case b/c it's the league backstory?

Some events in the League Backstory as well as others Character Backstories take place after some of the in-game content. Think of our first 10 levels or so on our home planet as our "backstories" or "pre-backstories" in this case.
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