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Author Topic: "The Trap (Closed RP)" Discussion Thread  (Read 42970 times)

Ceid Ankoun

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Re: "The Trap (Closed RP)" Discussion Thread
« Reply #525 on: December 07, 2012, 09:37:20 AM EST »

Sorry for the long post. But this is the moment I was waiting for since I made the Trap.

What do you think of it? Too much? too little? Does it deliver or invoke an emotional reaction like I hoped?

I can't judge this. I just finished it and it is still fresh in my mind, I will be able to criticize it when I forget it a bit and read it with fresh eyes. Most likely in a day or two.
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Re: "The Trap (Closed RP)" Discussion Thread
« Reply #526 on: December 07, 2012, 01:31:26 PM EST »

Just enough. Well written. Looks like we're wrapping up now.
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Re: "The Trap (Closed RP)" Discussion Thread
« Reply #527 on: December 08, 2012, 08:24:40 AM EST »

Time to go a little bit Sithy on ya'll.   Maybe Ceid or Celadon catches the barest hint of what she's about.   But then, good luck picking that out from general darkness that surrounds our Nysa. :D
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Re: "The Trap (Closed RP)" Discussion Thread
« Reply #528 on: December 11, 2012, 10:50:52 AM EST »

Pride that scene was very good.  I read the beginning and i skipped to the end.  You guys have been working on that so long.  It could feel the emotion in the exchange.  I'm glad she did not die from the wound as I felt that would have been a bit too clich
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Re: "The Trap (Closed RP)" Discussion Thread
« Reply #529 on: December 14, 2012, 11:33:11 AM EST »

Appreciated Rem!

You are more than welcome to Cha-Cha with us anytime my friend.
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Re: "The Trap (Closed RP)" Discussion Thread
« Reply #530 on: December 14, 2012, 12:46:01 PM EST »

My friends! That is the end!!!

I must say that that was the most fun I had RPing ever!  Well done. You guys are both amazing writers and it has been an honor traversing this very long RP with you.

Till the next time which I hope it is very soon!

Again. Well done.  I am sorry if I cut you off if you were thinking about posting one more round, but I think this does the trick.

For our followers, I hope you enjoyed the story, and I hope you participate and start your own RP stories for everyone to enjoy. And for readers and writers involved, I hope you like the cliff hanger at the end their :D. Remember, this RP will tie in to the start of the upcoming episode of the Guild back-story. Bringing about a massive change in guild structure from what we had before to what we have now.
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Re: "The Trap (Closed RP)" Discussion Thread
« Reply #531 on: December 14, 2012, 03:16:26 PM EST »

Yes. Considering my work schedule has been increased significantly, I have been in game much less. The RP'ing has been the best way for me to help the guild.

It has been a pleasure RPing with you Ceid and Nysa. A special thanks to our now departed friends, Quyn, Saron, Loyheta, and Amasro.

I hope everyone enjoyed it. I plan on letting the TORWars people know about this thread and show how RP is still alive and well in The Corellian League despite SWTOR being in constant flux.

May the Force be with you and Happy Holidays!!!!!
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Re: "The Trap (Closed RP)" Discussion Thread
« Reply #532 on: December 14, 2012, 05:51:51 PM EST »

Not a bad ending at all.  Could've used a broader Epilogue, but still, not bad at all.

Oh by the way, if folks have been wondering where I've been in game, it's been playing my Sith characters so that my beloved Nysa has the appropiate scary Sithy legacy stuff.

Also in the works are the first parts of Nysa's Chronicle.
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Re: "The Trap (Closed RP)" Discussion Thread
« Reply #533 on: April 29, 2013, 01:17:36 AM EDT »

Hahaa I feel terrible for never finishing this up with you guys. I did have a lot of fun in the RPs and these stories are pretty cool. Thanks Pride for taking over for me. I feel bad for abandoning you guys.

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Re: "The Trap (Closed RP)" Discussion Thread
« Reply #534 on: April 30, 2013, 05:54:18 PM EDT »

Well you SHOULD you damn DESERTER!!!   :P

It's all good, I hope I portrayed your character in an appropriate fashion. I tried to stick close to the Loyheta essence. :D

Anyways. You are Comatose. You are Currently in an Ankoun Family Medical Facility in the Corellian Capital, with all expenses being taken care of by the Ankoun Family as requested by Ceid. A good RP could be there in you waking up. Get creative :P.
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Re: "The Trap (Closed RP)" Discussion Thread
« Reply #535 on: May 03, 2013, 11:02:24 PM EDT »

This is such an old RP...... It was fun to read though
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